I am still unsuccessful

Rhyme boy sitting alone

It’s a rhyme of a boy who is unsuccessful and sacrifice his everything to become successful.


Rhyme begins:

When, I see my friends going to cinema. My Heart says, “Let’s go and enjoy.” I got ready. Suddenly, I realize, “No, I can’t. I’m still unsuccessful.”

When, I hear people talking about their Smartphone. My eyes struck on my bar phone. My heart says, “Come on let’s buy a new one.” Suddenly, I realize, “No I can’t I’m still unsuccessful.”

Riding my old bicycle, When, I see people travelling in brand new car. My heart says, “Come on dude. You’re adult. Let’s buy a two wheeler.” I felt very happy. However, I realize I’m still unsuccessful.

When, I see someone wearing a branded shoe. My heart says, “Let’s buy a pair.” Suddenly, I realize, “No I can’t. I have a lot of work. I’m still unsuccessful.”

When, I see people with their families having dinner in restaurant. My heart says, “Come on, have a coffee at least.” Suddenly my foot stops and I realize, “No I can’t. I’m still unsuccessful.”

When, I see my friends, going for party. My heart says, “Join them they’re your friends.” But I realize, “No I can’t. I’m still unsuccessful.”

[But]

When, I see people giving up. My heart says, “No you can’t. You’re still unsuccessful.”

When, they take rest. My heart says, “No you can’t. You’re still unsuccessful.”

When people afraid of problems. My heart says, “You can’t fall back. Fight with the problem. Because, you’re still unsuccessful.”

When people stop trying my heart says, “No you can’t. You’re still unsuccessful.”

When, they left me alone. My heart said, “Dude you’re not alone. I’m with you. Because you’re still unsuccessful.”

Author: Newtan

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10 Replies to “I am still unsuccessful

  1. Wow, Nice motivation friends. This is what you are. I recommend you to write like this. It is too good. Very effective to people who read your blog.👌👌👌👏👏👏👏

  2. Nice rhyme..the second part is gud bt for the first part if u do not enjoy your life not do anything for ur life and just think u r still unsuccessful, then one day u will die afterthat what will u do..u will do nothing.

    1. Yes, my friend. You’re absolutely right. However, sacrificing our enjoyment for few years can give happiness forever. By the way thanks for reading this rhyme. I hope you have enjoyed it. Have a great day.

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